Wednesday 5 June 2013

Death

Shadows crossing on the ground,
Fire rising in the skys.
Time Passing fast,
Motions going slow.
Shattering Images,
Falling down snow.
Darkness consuming all,
A little more to know.
The light closing in,
A fate going to be closed.
Strength withering away,
Giving up hope.
Time to meet the one,
That we all call Death.


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Monday 29 April 2013

Lord of the flies, Found poetry

A silver moon,
rose over the horizon.
Silver down on the water,(103)
Other lights in the sky.(106)

Flames mastering,
Branches.
Earth vibrating.
Smoke between the island
And the moon.
Fire was near,
Cries where nearer.(220)

A Hiss of dark,
A whisper of fear.(135)
Rolling over,
Trying to cry.
Looking up,(222)
The island,
Shuddering with flame.(223)


Tuesday 5 March 2013

reflection 9

After i read the book i was quite sad with the ending, how immigrants where treated. the lady fell off the stairs and got injured badly but the ambulance people took it like nothing, they treated it like it was disgusting. This made the lady who had a chance of living die in the eyes of her neighbours. the book was some what boring BUT it also had very interesting parts. sometimes i would get bored, maybe my mind is more attracted to fantasy haha. 

reflection 8

The children in the book always just want to be a pure canadian, when the grandma says "china in war agian" the sister would protest" theres no war in canada" but the grandma would always remind them " you china not canada, always war in china" the children want to be pure candians which are making them a banana; yellow outside, white inside.

reflection 7

the old grandmother was always likeing the small brother more how she calls the sister moh yong and that she would aways say its a waste for wong to buy her stuff. but somehow we still sense the love the grandma has for the sister.

reflection 6

The little sister didnt want to learn chinese nor did the other childs in the family, they perfer to think they are part of canada now and they should just be learning english  but poh-poh thinks they should not forget the 'oldways'.

reflection 5

The little sister seemed to really like old wong and that the old man liked the girl too,he would buy her stuff that her grandma would say is a 'waste'. they whent out to see movies and had fun together.